January 19

Using Transitions

Activity for students: The following sentences are about the same topic, transitions, but they do not flow well at all. Rewrite the same paragraph but make it your own and create a smooth flow by including transitions to guide the reader through the ideas. Post your paragraph both as a comment to this one and on your own blog. If you can, highlight in yellow the parts that are transitions.

 

Writing can seem choppy. The sentences don’t seem to fit together. Readers are not engaged by that type of writing. Sentences can be in the same paragraph if they share a topic. Paragraphs should be about more than a shared topic. People use transitions when they speak. It comes naturally. People who read a lot use transitions naturally. Other people struggle with them. It is a skill that has to be practiced. It can be developed. The benefits are huge.

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Posted January 19, 2012 by Waldner in category ELA 10

1 thoughts on “Using Transitions

  1. vballgirl97

    This is my way to use transitions to improve the paragraph.

    When reading sentences written by inexperienced writers, the sentences can seem choppy.This is because some of the sentences don’t seem to fit together, making the readers not engaged by that type of writing. Sentences can be in the same paragraph if they share a topic, but paragraphs should be about more than a shared topic. Sometimes people use transitions when they speak without even realizing it; they just come naturally to you. People who read a lot use transitions naturally, or more easily, while others struggle with using them. It is a skill that can be developed, but one has to practice it to develop it. The benefits when using transitions are huge.

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