September 23

ELA 9 Sept 23/16 Rating Student Endings: #4

“No, my dear. Said the landlady. Only you.”

The landlady touched his soft blushed cheeks but he could barely see her, everything was so blurry, he started to think maybe it was the tea. “I think it’s time for bed,” the lady said. So Billy walked over to the stairs and started going up, he was thinking about if he would make it to work tomorrow because he wasn’t feeling that great.

As he was walking up the stairs he tripped because everything was so blurry. He got back up and realized he was on the third floor, so he thought about the other guests who by the lady said were on the third floor.

He saw a tall man about 18 years of age. Billy approached him with caution, the man did not move. Billy went and reached for his hand to check his pulse, the man had no pulse. He could see the fear in this man’s eyes, he wondered what had happened to him. All of the sudden he heard the landlady come up the stairs, Billy hid in the closet. The lady came in and said, “bring him to me”. Billy felt a hand rest on his shoulder and then another on the other shoulder. He turned around and it was the other man he pushed Billy out of the closet.

The lady came up to him and stroked his cheeks and said: “darling there is no need to fear me I am on your side now darling I think it is time for bed”.

Billy made his way down the stairs to bed. As he was laying there he was trying to picture what he was seeing on the roof it was a weird drawing all over the roof, but all Billy could see was a colorful blur. He was feeling lightheaded. He heard someone coming it was the lady she came into his room and crawled into his bed, she cuddled right up to him but the man moved over but she can even closer now. Billy waited until she was in a deep sleep, and when she was he snuck over to his patio.

The city was so beautiful, he tried getting a closer look but then he leaned too far and fell off the patio, and got knocked out. In the morning a man was walking by and saw Billy and called the police. The police saw that Billy was dead and so they took him to his parents the police knocked on the door and his mother opened the door.

“Your son is dead,” said, the officer.

The officer saw the smile on her face turn to a frown and she bursts into tears and, her husband ran over to the door after she told her husband the news a single tear rolled from his eye down his cheek.

The police brought them over to the vehicle and let them see their son the second the bag was opened the mother dropped down to his level and hugged him. A tear fell from her face onto his right on his cheek, the father couldn’t even look at him it hurt too much. A little boy came out of the house it was Billy’s son Mat. He came over to the van and saw his grandparents crying. He looked into the van and saw his father in the van.

He got all excited and jumped in the van and yelled, “daddy”.

Mat realize that his daddy wasn’t moving, mat started freaking out and shaking his dad while he was crying. His grandmother came over and toyed pulling him of his father she told the man to take the body away. The man took the van and left while the grandmother was holding back Mat. Now Mat is fatherless.




Posted September 23, 2016 by Waldner in category ELA 9

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