December 8

ELA 7 – 8 Writing Development: 55 word stories

Some writing practice for you today: Another Beginnings Writing Prompt and then a “55 word story” Challenge!

  1. Beginnings #8 Label it properly in your Google Doc and share to me.
  2. AND Written in the same Google Doc, try developing some Fifty-five Word Story Writing:
    It is a type of story writing that involves writing descriptively (activating the 5 senses) and including dialogue (speech exchanged between characters or internal dialogue). But there is a restricted pattern for sentence lengths you have to follow; the instructions are below.

    1. You can try using a Story Generator if you want.
    2. Write one story after another. See how it goes!

Instructions: from Write Moves text pgs 169-170Write Moves: A Creative Writing Guide and Anthology - Broadview Press

Dip your toe into story structure by writing a “55-word story”, a fiction narrative exactly ten sentences long.

  • The first sentence must have precisely 10 words, the second sentence nine words, the third sentence eight words, and so on until the final sentence is composed of a single word.
  • All acronyms and digits must be spelled out (“28” is “twenty-eight”, which
    counts as two words).
  • The 55-word story must include a setting, a character in conflict, and a resolution (or sense of “ending”).
  • To compose, write the numbers 10 through 1 (the number of words allowed in each sentence) down the left side of your page.
  • Draft the story first as a list of sentences then transcribe your draft into prose format (see the example below).
  • Notice that each time a new character speaks, there is a new line.

Here is a 55-word story called “Wax and Wane” written as an example:

 

“Say that again,” she whispered, tickling fingers through its hair. (10)
It’s not yours,” he whispered, knealing in the barn. (9)
“Tell me again, Duane,” she sobbed, eyes excited. (8)
“It’s not yours, not yours, Diane – Not! (7) The animal purred between them both. (6)
“Say it again,” she whispered. (5) Duane shifted his body. (4) The kitten slept. (3)
“It’s beautiful.” (2)
Mine!” (1)

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September 16

First Chapter Friday (ELA 7-8)

You’re going to pick a new novel today and just read the beginning. You may not continue or finish that novel, but you’ll read the beginnings of many novels and get a sense of what you like and don’t like in stories.

As you read, you can consider:

  • The Who, What, When, Where, and Why of the story told
  • What you find interesting or not interesting.
  • Whether you would continue reading that book if you could and if you’d recommend it to others.

You’ll create a video review of your First Chapter Friday to share your thoughts.

Some novels you can pick from to start include:

Less mature novels first — > to more mature novels at the end

Additional Books & Links: December 2022

  • Wolfish:
  • Moongarden: sci-fi book of a young girl in training on the Moon, after Earth’s plants turned toxic. She is training for the role her parents also play in their society, to be Number Whisperers, but she’s afraid she’s not skilled or capable. (58 pgs preview)
  • Illuminations: a young girl’s family are talented painters of magical illuminations, but in trying to help she releases a magical creature that wants to destroy her family.
  • A Wizard’s Guide to Defensive Baking: a young girl’s magic works only through bread dough, making gingerbread men come to life, but finds a body on her bakery floor (4 chapters preview)
  • Spy School – Book 1: young boy tries to stay safe from cyber-enemies
  • Amari and the Night Brothers (Book 1): young girl is a supernatural investigator
  • Amari and the Great Game (Book 2) young girl is a supernatural investigator
  • Refugee: follows the story of 3 characters fleeing persecution – a boy trying to flee Nazis, a cuban girl fleeing, etc.
  • When Stars are Scattered: graphic novel of a young Somolia boy and his brother growing up in a refugee camp in Kenya
  • Squire: graphic novel of a young girl who wants to become a Knight, so when war breaks out among her people, it’s her opportunity to earn citizenship by training in a competitive program. (35 pgs preview)
  • Elatsoe: a young girl lives in a version of America where there is magic, monsters, and ghosts of animals she can revive. (43 pages preview)
  • The Benefits of Being an Octopus: seventh grade girl helps look after her younger siblings while her mom works (26 pgs preview)
  • Wishtree: an old tree is the main character here who listens to the stories of the townspeople nearby and has animal friends it speaks with
  • Big Nate Series (Book 1): boy protagonist surviving 6th grade
  • Alone: 12 yr old girl plans a secret sleepover w best friends but wakes up to an abandoned town and no internet, power, etc. (43 pgs preview)
  • Ground Zero: fiction story of 9 yr old boy who went to work with his dad at the World Trade Center on the day 9-11 happened (29 pgs preview)
  • The Vanderbeekers of 141st Street: 5 siblings have to figure out how to save their home after their landlord doesn’t renew their lease

Physical Book Copies you could try: on the table (Ms Waldner’s library)

  • The Maze Runner (dystopian/sci-fi)
  • Scythe (dystopian/sci-fi)
  • The Hobbit
  • The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy (sci-fi)
  • Miss Peregrine’s Home for Peculiar Children
  • The Giver (dystopian/sci-fi)
  • The Hobbit

 

 

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September 6

ELA 7/8 Identity Self-Portraits

Writers can express ideas about their identity through poetry, like we’ve read. They can also do it visually, as we will try today.

For today’s activity, you will need:

  • your markers and/or pencil crayons
  • While you do the work, Ms Waldner will take your photo and Cartoon it for this activity.

In groups of 4-5, look at the four self-portraits at the following link and follow these steps:

  1. In general, discuss the things you notice in each self-portrait example.
  2. Create a list with examples of their identity they included through visuals.
    1. Example: musical notes or keys of a piano may represent their musical interest or talent
    2. Example: A Canadian flag likely represents their nationality.
  3. Write your list examples out on Post-its
  4. and see if you can create Categories to group them under.
  5. If you get stuck, you can check this List of Identity Categories

    Individually, then…

  6. Using the Categories of Identity, write/develop your own list of examples that represent you. Try to develop examples in each category.
    1. Example: Maybe you include a wheat sheaf to represent a farming background.
  7. I will give you a printed cartoon of your photo.
  8. On the LEFT, colour it as normal.
  9. On the RIGHT, draw and colour in your identity examples from your list.

If Done, scroll to the bottom for Step 3. 

After you’ve coloured in your image, then you have TWO OPTIONS for what to do with the blank perimeter on the page.

  1. Draw lines from the center out and create/draw words that you feel represent how you feel or what you think people think of you. (see image)
  2. Create horizontal or vertical lines and create/draw words that you feel represent how you feel or what you think people think of you. (see image)

 

 

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March 16

ELA 9 What we’ve been up to…

In Term 2 for our class, we’ve studied many different kinds of texts, played with different techniques in writing, and worked on building skills.

We studied the graphic novel The Breadwinner.

  • students had to use visual inference skills a lot to make sense of the storyline since there wasn’t as much text and dialogue
    The Breadwinner: A Graphic Novel: Aircraft Pictures, Cartoon Saloon and Melusine, Twomey, Nora, Ellis, Deborah: 9781773061184: Books - Amazon.ca

 

  • students wrote first-person letters as and to a character from the storyline.

Each student chose their own novel to read – most chose a book different from others and one group picked the same book to read together.

  • They read during class and would do short Summary activities like:
      • Socrative Responses to share initial impressions or describe their book’s setting
      • Quick Write activities to practice writing skills without overthinking the content (needs to be consistent/sustained writing for a set period of time – 8 mins)

    • and moved on to Formal Literary Paragraph Writing with supports that broke the process down step by step
    • That paragraph writing eventually developed into formal essays in Google Docs with formative feedback so they could become stronger writers.

They practiced some creative writing & visual fun with Five-Step Stories. Students picked a random image for the Intro, 3 images for the middle, and 1 image for the end of a hypothetical story. Then another student had to come up with a storyline to match the random images. It was worth some laughs.

We also started a unit focusing on Search for Self – students learned (or reviewed) Figurative Devices used for creative wordplay in poetry.

  • They developed some of their own with Six-Word Memoirs that they then formatted in a visual design using the Canva website.
  • They read through together a new-to-them format of texts – novels written in prose form (poems). While we read through them together, students anonymously submitted Observations through a Socrative open-answer activity.

  • They also tested their skills in identifying these plays-on-words (figurative devices) by a group competition activity – to see which group could wrack up the most points for devices found in a poem.

We then watched a movie called A Monster Calls which none of them had seen and was the most wonderful movie; it brought on a lot in our discussions.

  • They tracked the things they observed in the film as they watched (character influences, foreshadowing, development of tension, motivation of characters, etc)
  • And then got into some small discussion groups to talk through a number of a bank of questions to pick from.

A Monster Calls (2016) - IMDb

Most recently, they’ve been working to develop a poetry multimedia video from a poem of their choosing. They had to develop an emotional reading of the poem, find media (video, images, sound effects) to include, as well as pick appropriate background music to help set the tone. They used different video-making programs that mostly work in similar fashions. They focused on improving their use of:

  • staggering the layers of media they used (so an image and sound didn’t start at the same time)
  • including a clear beginning and end to their projects
  • using transitions between the media sources
  • tweaking sound volumes, fading in and out
  • using text overlay
  • studying their project for the details of style

They’re improving their writing by many writing activities, because more writing makes better writers. And we’ve had a lot of great discussions analyzing ideas and literary themes.

 

More to come before June!

 

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March 14

A3 Relationships That Influence

As the first part of this course looks backwards to childhood influences, this section in particular looks at the most likely people in society that support children.

Pg 1: Intro to Section Topic

  • Big Ideas
  • Stories are written that revolve around the relationships of young and old people together – consider who benefits more from these interactions?

Before Reading Either Story: Reminders on Theme vs Tone:

  • Theme is the moral of the story, the message an author wants to leave readers with. Theme can be a single word or a phrase that relates to the ideas developed in the story. Examples of themes include:
    • Vulnerability of people
    • Family relationships & conflicts
    • Struggles
    • Isolation & loneliness
    • Mentoring of old to young
    • Regret
    • The role of women in families
    • Here is a Huge List of Themes online
  • Tone is the mood developed in a story. By the events and language the author uses in the story, how is it intending to make readers feel? Tone is expressed as an “emotion”; if your tone answer isn’t an emotion, a feeling, you’ve misunderstood tone. Examples of tone include:

Pg 2: Studying Text #1: “The Rink” 

  • The “young troublemaker” (someone struggling to find their way) and an “elder mentor” (who can share wisdom) storyline – a common archetype, such as:
      • Dumbledore & Harry Potter
      • Obi-Wan Kenobi & Luke Skywalker
      • Mr. Miyagi & Daniel LaRusso
      • Mufasa & Simba
      • Master Shifu & Po
      • Genie & Aladdin
  • Example films: St. Vincent with Bill Murray. Older person less connected to others in society spends time with a younger person who could use a mentor in their life. Or Dennis the Menace, if you know that film!

    • ELA 20 The Rink – text_rotated to read
    • Symbolism in literature – a refresher.
      In literature, writers can often develop more meaning within the story by using a concept or object that comes to also represent other ideas. This is used in the story “The Rink”.

Examples of Symbolism developed in texts like Animal Farm and Macbeth:

Pg 4: Comprehension Questions for Text #1

 

Pg 5-6 Practice Integrating references into writing

Pg 7: Parent-child relationships: Text #2

  • a moment/memory that lasts for a child

Pg 8 What to watch for in this short story (active reading)

  • Flashbacks in Writing

  • Visual Example from the short story “Home Place”. The text in yellow is all flashback – the development of tension in the story all comes from past interactions between characters, instead of using current interactions to create that tension.
    All the text coloured in Purple (see pic below) is a flashback in this story. You’ll recognize the Present events of the story begin and end this story, but the bulk of tension exists is developed as past memories. (This is an ELA A30 text.)
  • Cause and Effect in literature

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March 1

ELA 20 A2 Section: Childhood Wonder & Imagination

If you recall, when you did the Childhood Mapping Activity, it hopefully trigger memories for you of when you were a child. That’s one of the enjoyable parts of this Course – the nostalgia it brings up of some of the happy experiences in your childhood development.

This next section aims to continue that process, specifically this initial beginning, by remembering what it was like during storytime. 

What was it like being read to as a child? Do you remember?

For example, it may have included:

  • lots of picture books
  • a comfortable location you and an adult usually settled in for reading
  • some favourite books you listened to over and over
  • an adult who may have read with character voices or sound effects
  • lots of interesting visuals and illustrations in the books, for a child to fixate on while they listened to the story
  • animals or non-living things that took on life or mystical/magical elements in the stories, like fairies or princesses cursed by witches
  • Unknown to you, it may also have included some darker, scarier elements, like in the fairytales where the parents took their kids to the forest so they could leave them there where a witch catches them, fattens them up, so she can eat them!
  • A memory of mine from youth – attending Reading Time at the Saskatoon Frances Morrison Library. There was a children’s reading room we had to duck under a small door to get into.
    Wild Libraries I Have Known: Frances Morrison Children's Library « Pickle Me This

To try to trigger for you what it felt like to sit and watch someone read to you a picture book, listen to the audio linked below: it includes our intro thoughts to this section and reading of the Big Ideas. 

 

Other examples of childhood imagination on display:

  • fairy gardens
    How to make a fairy garden - Laughing Kids Learn
  • elf on the shelf holiday traditions
    Easy and Effortless Elf on the Shelf Ideas | The Elf on the Shelf
  • kids playing behaviour modelled by adults
    Playing House," and What it Tells Us About Our Kids - Legacy of Hope Foundation
  • imaginative shows/characters that children believe are real
    Symbolic Play: Examples, Definition, Importance, and More

 

 

 

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